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B**E
Slow burn
World building? CheckHot priestesses? CheckThese 2 ingredients formed a cohesive plot and slow sexual buildup to a very satisfying ending. I have a lot more to read. I do appreciate the author’s tactics. I can identify with Jack as I also am impatient about the leveling especially when it comes to his devout followers. Kudos!
J**G
Nice start to the series
This was a good start to the series. The MC and the three heroines were all likeable and the author did a good job of differentiating between the three heroines. The Lit-RPG elements added were interesting and did not overpower the plot. I especially liked how the hero had to help the heroines overcome obstacles while not being able to do much directly himself.
K**R
Wow!
This story was pretty intense. It is definitely original. Jack is summoned to another world as a god. Things grow interesting as he gets to know his three priestess. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.
D**A
As It Says
Fantasy LitRPG harem adult situationsI didn't have a lot of expectations for this book, but it did deliver. Three nubile young women arrive at a shrine and begin to pray. In nearly all LitRPG stories, the MC receives a body, picks a class, gets New companions, and starts leveling.The MC, Jack, however, depends on his own memory of games, and he advances as quests are completed by his nubile female followers, the naiad, Penelope; the winged fairy girl, Alea; and the human girl, Nicola. Each completed quest grants Jack additional powers. This different take on a familiar theme was well done and intriguing. A bit rougher in the adult scenes than I prefer, but overall satisfying. I'm in for book 2. Recommended.
D**N
A new take on the LITRPG
So this one was one I had some hesitation about initially but after a chapter or two I was hooked on the concept. Not as heavy in the stats and numbers as some LITRPG stories, this one does have a bit of it, but mostly it is used as a means to quantify things as opposed to making things overpowered.The main character is a little one dimensional but he grows as time goes by. The same can be said about the trio of female leads, they do become more than they first appear when given time to blossom.Also, the power curve can be noted. All too often in the "MC becomes a god" series, the power curve is logarithmic and it ends up stealing some of the fire from the story. That is not the case in this one. He's a god, but also rather limited in what he is actually able to do at first and isn't horrifically overpowered by the end.All in all, its going on the list of series for me to watch and wait for the sequel.
M**S
Its an Eric Vall tale, expect pages of bad erotica surrounded by a half-way decent plot.
The plot idea is interesting. A young man from Earth is somehow spiritually dragged into another world where 3 young women claim to be his priestesses await. Of course, the devoutness of his priestesses vary, as does his own belief in his divinity. But he's a gamer so he plays along and near the end, discovers he can manifest in the world, where he behaves as one might expert if they have read many harem fantasy tales.Sadly, while the idea is good, the rest suffers from the usual flaws from the genre. The female characters have no depth, and are fantasy fodder most of the time, with the main character often obsessively observing how much flesh is revealed by their priestess garb. The hero himself is worse. He's not intelligent, he's always thinking with his lower head, he is condescending to the girls multiple times. He's just a jerk of the first water that honestly I didn't want to read about.And after he can manifest in the world I wanted to snooze through the rest of the book as it seemed to become one very long and boring sex scene.Its not terrible.Its actually well edited and flows rather well.but even if this could be considered "porn with a plot". I find that I want a story first, and any sex scenes need to feel organic to the story. The ones here are just there to annoy, or at least I felt that way.Its 3 star by my standards. not terrible but hard for me to recommend.
J**N
Different Prospective
It is an iseki from a different perspective. Jack awakens in a world not his own and no physical form. He needs to work with his priestess to build his town and become stronger.Love the buildup and the different personality; looking forward on how it develops.
B**D
Being a God Means you have NO Body
I was having a hard time reading this story because most of the story is about 3 gorgeous priestisses talking to a God that guides them to making things for them to survive. They build tools for hunting to eat and a room with a roof. The reason for this separation is because as a God, Jack knows how to do these things because he is from another world brought here suddenly. Though, my issue is that for 4/5th the book, he has no physical interactions with these women. For this author to write a story like this was confusing for me, until close to the end when he completes the few quests given to him, as a God, allowing him to have more interactions with the priestesses. The key is in the last page of the book, making me to want to read the next book.Read in 4 days
M**.
Great concept again!
I really like the way the stories you write are fast paced, while being detailed and interesting. Keep up the great work Mr. Vall!
K**E
Surprisingly good harem novel
A slow buildup and mystery reveal. Very well written sensual scenes, mostly well developed characters— the Fairy was bland, at least to me.
Z**N
An interesting tale
I'm of two minds in regards to this one, whilst like others of his work its a well written piece with excellent balance and an interesting concept, I feel it is something that needs to be read a couple of times before one is sure they wish to continue reading the series. Regardless I believe that it is worth trying if anything.
K**R
Rpglite porn? Count me in!
I do so enjoy the harem genre, and with the girls wanting babies it really gets me fired up. Slow start makes the payoff better, and a tad concerned over how the sequel will keep up tension. New girls joining them? Author only knows.
K**R
Building Harem Town
It took a while to get interested in the story.It felt like the beginning of a game at first, slow going.Now it seems promising.😉
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